Talk:Akiza Garasu-Zeledias/@comment-123.211.132.42-20141212021659/@comment-108.29.47.179-20150817220332

I like it;* you should fix some of* the* spelling errors though,* key*.* I'm* just saying.* Also,* try to* add more about your character* in there.* The* appearance seemed a little small and* there were no details about abilities.

-Zane